-This animal is in risk of extinction because of the loss of habitat and prays, that happened mainly because of agriculture and cattle ranching.
-Because of hunting.
-Because of his valuable skin.
-Because of the industries.
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I think that you information is complete, but very simple. This is information is very common, you can put more specific information about the jaguar. The information is clear, but you have to correct the form of writting, for example in what are the factors that are threating this species? you have different point starting with because, because. You can put all that in one paragraph.
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